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COFFEE by Miyazu COFFEE by Miyazu
my original character
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Cahotic Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Writer
Love the cut out feel and the lines. Your style is great and the shading is really nice. I only wish there was more space ahead of him, the direction he's looking, and less behind him as it would balance out the picture and show the viewer where he's headed, right now your eyes try to follow his eyeline and the stop at the end of the picture is too drastic next to the amount of space behind him :)
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Miyazu Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
ah thank you for pointing that out! actually, at first, I had him more in the middle (so there was more space in front of him AND behind him, sort of balanced), but then the 'smart-me' inside thought ;
how can i convey to the viewers that he's currently walking/heading somewhere , in other words, not just standing there.
So, i thought, I sort of chopped down the space in front of him to make him look like he's 'walking out of the picture'.

But I guess, it had the reverse effect I was looking for... i might upload the version with more space in front of him later on :) Thank you so much for your feedback! <3
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Osx86 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
kasih jempooooolllll.jempol kakiiiii :P
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Miyazu Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
ternyata lo emang forever online gils :iconhappytearplz: tengkyuuuu! :XD:
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Osx86 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
HUEUEHEHEH
EH NABILONG,PAKE SAI ENAK GA SIH?
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Miyazu Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
enak banget, asli :D :iconthumbsupplz:
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Osx86 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
cobain ah :>
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Miyazu Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
yoi :D
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